Greetings everyone:

I'm new at this forum, so, I'd like to show you my first official map; official cause is the first one I really finished. I want tom make another maps, but first I wanna you critic me (in a good way) for the details, and make better everytime.

http://mx.geocities.com/tech_rc86/castle_on_the_hill.zip 

Thanks to all

3 Suggestions:

Rename the map to something else, nobody likes a map whose name tells them what it is (Ex: 2v2 big hill get oil now! by blah blah blah blah) Pick a name that makes it seem dignified.

Make the ramps to the top right player alot bigger (atleast 2X as big)

Also delete (use ramp tool) these mountains, they throw the map off and make it seem unbalanced.

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Ok, see what I can do.

About the name, I'm not good at that kind of names, why don you get me more examples..

heheheh

I suggest thinking of basic words (such as mountain, snow, ice, ect...) that go with your map, and go to dictionary.com and use the thesaurus to find synonyms and see where the word combo's take you. Infact I used that method to pick a name for my map "Mountain Summit."

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Here's with changes.

By the way, How can I upload without use an external server, I click on "Insert file", at the reply, but it don't accept the file.

http://mx.geocities.com/tech_rc86/War_at_Oil_Hill.zip 

By the way, it get a little laggy in times when I play against AI, do you have that problem??

Isn't the PC, cause I've another maps and that never happen.

To upload big files go to filefront.com

To make It less laggy you can remove some trees and other small details like that and it will speed it up.

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