AdrianeMapMaker
9 years ago
Hey Guys this is the 2nd TestRun of the Map Humanity Last Hope and I need A One or More Who Can Test the Map And Critique it, Soon as Possible

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klingondragon
9 years ago
SkyMix_RMT
9 years ago
I got to the part where the counter "Bombers arrive in:" is 0. But after that nothing happens, it just keeps blinking.
Also the terrorist walk in a straight line wich is not very realistic maybe you should make the path with diffrent ways and not just 1 so they dont go all together in the same line.
And also you should remove the sniper upgrade in the generals points menu, because a player might waste points there and you can even build them so no point.

Other than that it's a fun map to play! Good work.
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klingondragon
9 years ago
Positives:
  • Wave Counter
  • Giant Terrorists
Negatives:
  • No money to build anything (Either provide: more starting money, more starting units, a supply gatherer, or receive reinforcements more often)[*]Wave Counter covers Briefings (Making some things hard to read)[*]Few Starting Forces - Heavy reliance on Allied AI[*]Poor Grammar and Sentence Structure in Strings (I can fix this for you, if you want)[*]Terrorists Standing Around doing nothing[*]Terrorists Getting Stuck[*]Giant terrorists are too easy to kill
Some of the above are minor things that bother me (and probably don't bother others). Some are more serious and really should be changed.
AdrianeMapMaker
9 years ago
SkyMix Said:Undone Script
-Bomb Script:Look Like I forgot to Delete That Script Sorry
-General Points: Are Already Done Now I will Just Apply it In Next And Last Test Run
-Unrealistic Movement:If You See The Map using Worldbuilder i Put Several Waypoint Paths In The Whole Map ... That Being Randomly Chosen By The Ai .... Are You Requesting to add More Waypoints if Yes,Where Should i?

Klingon Said:About Negative

-The Boss is Easy To Kill ..."its Purposed"
-Wave Counter ..."i Think The Wave Counter is Nice"
-terrorist getting Stuck... How This Happens? when They hunting the Player's Humvee? or Chinese Police car?
-Money ... Look like ive Done Another Mess
-Standing Terrorist/Boss ... They Maybe Cause Of The Waypoint Path , I Extend it Already.
-Few Starting Forces ... "its Purposed" i will just adjust the player's money

-Grammar... Soon I will Give You The Original BackUp Text Of The Map

By The Way Guys ,What Wave Did You Got or Withstand?

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klingondragon
9 years ago

-terrorist getting Stuck... How This Happens? when They hunting the Player's Humvee? or Chinese Police car?

When they go round buildings some rub up against them and then stop walking.

-Standing Terrorist/Boss ... They Maybe Cause Of The Waypoint Path , I Extend it Already.

They don't even start along the paths. they just stand around at the spawn areas (this might be intentional, but it doesn't look good).

By The Way Guys ,What Wave Did You Got or Withstand?

Bombers arrive in:
I never found I was really doing anything. I was relying on the UN. I never had the money to build anything.
AdrianeMapMaker
9 years ago
Some of The Terrorist is intentionally to be standby in StartPoint

By The Way Here is The Code: In Map.str For Grammar Check
intro1
"Northern Canada. Usa Safe Zone.
\n Humanity's Last Hope"
END

intro2
"U.N. Forces And Chinese Tech Are Here To Support Us
\n General"
END

intro3
"The President Is Now On Board"
END

intro4
"Main Objective:
\n Defend The City as well Our Command Center
\n Protect The President"
END

hint1
"The U.N. Has Give Another Reinforcements"
END

hint2
"The U.N. Base Is Under Attack"
END

SCRIPT:countdown
"Wave:"
END

boss
"Holy ****,General We have Found a Giant Creature Incoming
\n We Need some help over Here"
END

boss2
"Beware Theyre Armed With Dangerous HighExplosive"
END

pres
"General,The City is Now Being Overrun
\n This is Bad ,Be Ready To Defend The Base"
END

pres2
"General,We Cant take any heavy losses
\n The President is Order To Bomb The City"
END

hint3
"Sir We have Found a Gla Vehicle Luring
\n Infecteds ,Look Like ,this is Theyre Plan"
END

hint4
"We have seen another Giant here, General
\n Prepare to Stop Them"
END

SCRIPT:bomb
"Bomber's Arrive In:"
END

presdie
"General,The President Died
\n We Have Been Defeated"
END

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klingondragon
9 years ago

Some of The Terrorist is intentionally to be standby in StartPoint

I expected as much, but it still doesn't look very good (to me), perhaps you could reduce the number.

And I already have the str file. It's in the map folder. I was going to wait until the final version (unless the strings are finished and ready.).
AdrianeMapMaker
9 years ago
Hey Guy's I really need a Comment For My 3rd Version of the Humanity Last Hope? Is it Good Now Is there A Problem On it?

Download it Here: If you Dont Have The File Already

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klingondragon
9 years ago
I'll review it in the morning.
klingondragon
9 years ago
Most of my above problems with your map still stand.
AdrianeMapMaker
9 years ago
What Wave you Withstand?
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klingondragon
9 years ago
Wave 21/22 ish.

I just don't feel like I'm playing. I send in my Humvees and a few rangers and, after a couple of waves, they're dead and I'm out of money.

Also the wave counter still covers up the briefings.

I also had a problem with the giant terrorists. When I try to select them, I have to click their legs because: when you scaled them up, you didn't increase their selection size.

I can fix my 2 latter points myself and send you the code if you like.
AdrianeMapMaker
9 years ago
Just like what i need i need that code pls


; The Code Your Trying to Share Is a Great Advance To My Works
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klingondragon
9 years ago
I'll post it soon. I'll need to test it first.
klingondragon
9 years ago
    NamedTimerCountdownPosition         = X:0.01 Y:0.6 
 GeometryMajorRadius = 40.0
 GeometryMinorRadius = 40.0
 GeometryHeight = 48.0
 ShadowSizeX = 56;
 ShadowSizeY = 56;

Feel free to play around with those.

Y:0.6 puts the wave counter below the briefings.

The geometry stuff was just me doubling a few numbers (it's not perfect).
SkyMix_RMT
9 years ago
Klingon did you buy flashbangs? It makes the mission so much easier
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AdrianeMapMaker
9 years ago
Lol I forgot To Remove That There but its now Deleted in The Download Section Map Version

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AdrianeMapMaker
9 years ago
There Will Be A Hardcore Mod For That Map Because For Those Beterans And Elites Who Wants Some Real Action ; In The Night
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klingondragon
9 years ago
I couldn't buy flash bangs. I can't beat the mission. And I don't accept any map until I (or another reviewer) manage to beat it (as proof the victory scripts work).